1000 years in the future, a schizophrenic has been kidnapped by a group of rebel soldiers. And it seems they've bitten off more than they can chew...



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tygermon
Posted by tygermon
September 24th, 2011, 4:44 pm

The following is constructive criticism, please don't hurt me! ._.;

Howdy there! Just found your comic and read through it. I know there's not much yet but so far it's really good! Good storyline so far, great art!, unique recognizable characters (though Soshika(?) almost looks like Reah from Slightly Damned but that's okay, she's cool looking!). I can't wait to see how your comic develops and I'd love to read more! I'd love a characters page on your site though where you give a little bit of information about the characters but make sure you don't give spoilers on it if you do make one or warn the readers before they read it if you do put spoilers on it.

I do however agree with others that have commented about the font. It's plain and not that great. Try going to dafont.com or blambot.com and taking a look at their free fonts. Some of them are really good even at a smaller size.

One other thing I noticed is that on the first and third pages I almost didn't know what bubble to read next. It's not where they are, it's when you have one panel with two next to it, then from those two, no divider from the next. Maybe a little bit of shading on that open space between panels, try to define the individual boxes a little bit more or some comics that have confusing word bubbles put numbers next to them or arrows. Not saying you have to do this but a little more definition on the boxes would be a good thing.

End of constructive criticism. Again, please don't hurt me! ._.;



inhuman-comic
Posted by inhuman-comic
September 24th, 2011, 4:48 pm

@tygermon: actually, thank you very much for the crit!

the thing is, this comic was drawn before slightly damned existed (chu used to be a fan, asked if she could use some influence on her character designs...then got more popular and cut off all contact :\) so the similarity you're seeing isn't unfounded. this was drawn back in 2003 or so.

i need to get a layout working so i *can* link to character bios! thank you for reminding me!

and thanks on the bubbles too. like i said - 2003, so not much i can do about it now. but i wish i'd known you back then, i could have used the help! :>



tygermon
Posted by tygermon
September 24th, 2011, 5:26 pm

Your welcome! I've had people not like constructive criticism so I was a little uneasy at sayin' it.

If you would like, I could help with your layout. I've done my own and I love doing them! I could set everything up for you and then you could put in all the information and stuff if you'd like. If not, that's okay.

You started this in 2003?! Wow, how come you don't have much up yet? I kinda figure after all this time you must have done tons of pages! You're just hiding them aren't you? I wanna read more!! XD And you knew Chu before Slightly Damned? I'm jealous! I wish I knew her! Too bad I'm not too talkative on forums though. Oh well ^_^



inhuman-comic
Posted by inhuman-comic
September 24th, 2011, 5:54 pm

@tygermon: i hate to let you know my experience knowing chu didn't end well. she was my friend until she decided i wasn't drawing her enough fanart, and then treated me like everyone else she doesn't like...i'm sure you've seen that. :\

i'd like some help with my zombie comic layout first, actually! it's a lot more simple...i just want something dark and grungey feeling for it :>

and the truth is...the entire comic (all 421 pages) are uploaded on smackjeeves. BUT! they're set to update one per day for the next er. year. (but if you really can't wait, i have them all up on my personal site too :x)



tygermon
Posted by tygermon
September 24th, 2011, 6:04 pm

Wow, Chu doesn't sound too nice then, not the sort of friend I'd want to have. Anyway, I'd love to help you with whatever comic layout you want me to! I've nothing to do today, I'm just sitting on my butt watching Doctor Who on Netflix. I think doing a layout for you would be more constructive considering I've seen every episode at least two or three times each so far already.



inhuman-comic
Posted by inhuman-comic
September 24th, 2011, 6:06 pm

@tygermon: but the doctor is so much fun!
what do i need to do to help you with a layout? :o



tygermon
Posted by tygermon
September 24th, 2011, 6:19 pm

Well, for me to fix your layout, you would have to go under manage whatever webcomic you want me to do first, go to 'Authors', click 'Invite Authors' and type in my name. After that, I would accept your invitation. Then you would go back to 'Authors', click on 'Manage Author Permissions' and only give me access to 'Manage Appearance' and 'Custom Pages'. From those two sections I can fix your layout for you! ^_^



inhuman-comic
Posted by inhuman-comic
September 24th, 2011, 6:27 pm

@tygermon: okay - brace yourself. gonna try this!



tygermon
Posted by tygermon
September 24th, 2011, 6:49 pm

Okay, I'm a co-author now but like I said before, you have to give me permission on the author permissions so I can mess with the layout.

By the way, what colors, I know you said dark but dark blue, brown, or grey and black, what color scheme do you want. Also, do you want the links up at the top where they are now or the side or anything specific that you want? A good thing to do would be to go to other comic sites and look at their layouts to see if you like how certain things look so I can get a clue on how you want your layout to look.



inhuman-comic
Posted by inhuman-comic
September 24th, 2011, 7:20 pm

@tygermon: oh crud okay. i'll give you those now. sorry, smackjeeves is all very alien to me.

black, grey and tans will probably work! i don't really have any additional pages i'd like to link it to, except maybe back to my home site (inhuman-comic.com)?



Mrianna
Posted by Mrianna
September 24th, 2011, 9:22 pm

SheezyArt? Icarus? :O



inhuman-comic
Posted by inhuman-comic
September 24th, 2011, 9:23 pm

@Mrianna: it is i! after ten thousand years imprisonment!



Mrianna
Posted by Mrianna
September 25th, 2011, 9:46 pm

@inhuman-comic:

Wooo! I knew it! :D Glad to see you alive and well.

I started reading this awhile ago but there where so many I got intimidated... now I can read them as they are posted huzzah!



inhuman-comic
Posted by inhuman-comic
September 26th, 2011, 5:24 am

@Mrianna: indeed - that's the idea :>



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